Life in a Map | Direction

copyright 2011 Yehuda Remer Photography

 

I wish my life had a map

(sigh)

Now where do I begin ….

With a dial to the right connection

Giving me directions to a destination that is hard to choose

To tell you the truth, I’m confused

With the waves that have been coming through

I hide my vibe of distrust, selecting justice

Unsure if my moral compass has been compromised

 

I want a life

I want to live it

I can’t stand the feeling so distance

Pretend you were me for a moment

Step into my circle of life

And tell me, what you would choose

If you were looking through

A brass binocular from so far away

What do you say?

 

I would focus all my attention in one direction

The direction my heart tells me to go

I would open my hand

Stick to the plan

And let the compass lead the road

My soul

I would sail away to open sea and learn the ways of

Me

I’d learn my strength and weakness

Face all my demon and seizes them

I’d capture the power of loneliness

In my refection in the vast waters

I’d concur

 

(c) Copyright 2011 – Esther Douek. All rights reserved

 

 

27 Comments

  1. brian September 7, 2011

    i share the feeling in lack of direction…humorous a bit that we can give it to others what they should do but find ourselves at a lack…nice write…

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  2. Reflections September 7, 2011

    Often the greater challenge is to hear our own heart whispering the directions in which one should travel.

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  3. Peter September 7, 2011

    I like the premise of this poem and the way you’ve developed it. Good write.. // Peter.

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  4. Natasha September 7, 2011

    I know the direction…but I’ve got so many hands holding to tight to let me follow it! You write with an honest zest that is so very much appreciated…don’t lose that! Stay true to you, and soon you’ll have glowing neon lights pointing out the direction!

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  5. hedgewitch September 7, 2011

    Finding an identity, being true to oneself, navigating the often treacherous world, all do indeed need a personal map, and poetry is a great place to start drawing one, as you have here.

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  6. Donnell Leyba September 7, 2011

    Wow! That’s an appealing slant.

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  7. Heaven September 7, 2011

    I know the feeling too well….I like my life planned out nicely when I was younger…. Now, I stil do but I like to dip into something new, every now and then.

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